In my first draft I feel I was somewhat productive compared to my other two first drafts. But, as always I just kinda saying what I had to thought and it wasn't very organized. In my next draft I want to:
-work on organization
-add more personal stories (sensory details)
-work on clarifying what I'm trying to argue
-strong conclusion
I'm also feeling kind of confused on what I'm arguing. I want to re-evaluate my views and claims. I want to be clear on my points and what I'm trying to say.
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