I really loved the whole process of the workshop and getting all of the great feedback. I think overall everyone, along with myself, agrees that I should tone down my EXTREME language to make my paper more Rogerian. And also give more credit to the other side, which I'm waiting for an ILL to get to me to support the other side and to fulfill the requirement of my 2nd scholarly source.
I also agree that I need to state my stance on this issue earlier in the paper. I really got a lot of good advice from the workshop and now know what to work on, clarify and add to my final draft.
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