Writing Center Essay 3

I forgot to blog about going to the writing center...

I first went Thursday of last week and met with a girl who didn't seem very helpful. I didn't get the criticism I wanted and she just liked everything. She also didn't seem to have very much input on how to improve my argument just, "sure that sounds fine." So, I decided to go back.

I went back Tuesday (yesterday) after making a lot of changes to my paper. I changed the intro and took some things out and added some. But, I didn't really make any changes that my first helper suggested. The person who helped me the second time around was much more helpful and gave me a lot of good advice. She helped me to first figure out who my audience would be which helped with some issues of things that didn't really fit in. But overall, she helped me to clarify and gave me suggestions on when to expand on things and we agreed on stuff to take out. Overall it was very positive