Reflection 1.2

After writing my second draft, I feel more confident with my paper. It's definitely not perfect or how I want it to be in the end, but it's getting there. I worked more in this draft to incorporate sources, I struggled with determining how many were to many sources though. I think it's at a good amount right now. I still want to clean it up and revise it but I think my basic points and the structure are there now. I just want to reword some things and state things differently in my final draft. The feedback I got was good, I only received 2 out of 3 people's comments but I still got a lot of good commentary on my paper. They basically said what I thought they would say and that I just need to strengthen my argument. Overall, I'm much happier with my topic then I was in the beginning and I'm also happy with the sources I've found to help support my argument, I just need to work on citing them correctly and utilizing them where they will have the most impact.